We know we have done this when we have done these things.
The Switch
WALT: use adjectives and similes in our descriptive writing.
I'm sitting in the crowd I'm the ball boy I have a soccer ball in my hand I cheer for my idol Cristiano Ronaldo
He is chasing the colorful ball he slips on the spiky green grass he leaps
I try to move but know one can hear me over the loud screaming off fans.
Ouch I say that really hurt I go home really nauseous and dizzy I jump in My big bed I wake up I go stand in front shiny mirror. I yarn ah what has happened? I go down stairs the lady gives me the little black keys um ….Man what’s this for? She does not answer um OK thanks? I reply I stare at the car for like a minute who’s car is this? I say they say that’s your car silly. I just go with it they go inside I jump in, wow this is cool I turn the car on brr smash right into the flat wall whiter than someone's teeth.
I arrived for practice everyone stares at my car hi I say they all reply um Hi are you OK? Yep I say I leave I go into the gate everyone is still staring.
So I go practice my football and get ready for the game suddenly when The game comes … hey kid I look at his shoes he has the same shoes as me We play the game bang we crash heads I feel normal again I get up and go home.
